First Tune - Needs Criticism

[Hydra]

SiC-BoY - Undertow.mp3 (http://members.iinet.net.au/~ripitup/Darcy/Tunes/Sicboy%20-%20Undertow%20(Final%20Edit).mp3)

Yeah peeps check it out if yah can.. Give us the advice I need to improve with my production :D

[Church Decorator]

Originally posted by Hydra
SiC-BoY - Undertow.mp3 (http://members.iinet.net.au/~ripitup/Darcy/Tunes/Sicboy%20-%20Undertow%20(Final%20Edit).mp3)

Yeah peeps check it out if yah can.. Give us the advice I need to improve with my production :D

the beat is gay! all i can hear is a 909ride, and a couple of snare samples and a couple of bd samples. also using 909 toms for the fillins is not recommended!

the melody sounds totally random - also the lead sound used is crappy

needs more depth

better rhythm + more percussion

a decent melody if there's to be one

and if you're gonna have a bassline make it nasty and harsh sounding!

[Hydra]

Cheers... needed someone to tell me straight instead of people going yeah yeah its good then behind my back larf at me :D

[Church Decorator]

ah well its your first tune so it doesn't matter! (plus it's just my opinion and i don't really know much about dnb) i think i read somewhere that you were saying that it's about creating your own sound and not following the pack - i totally agree with that - it all starts with attitude so you're off on the right foot :)

[Hydra]

heheh cheers well if yah want SiC-BoY - Untitled (3rd Edit) (http://www.members.iinet.net.au/~ripitup/Darcy/Tunes/Hack%20It.mp3) check it out ! :D

[sanch]

Originally posted by Church Decorator
(plus it's just my opinion and i don't really know much about dnb)

I don't think your opinion would differ from anyone elses dude whether they like dnb or not, this track can lick my nutsack - sounds like it was made in 5 minutes, that being said, SiC-BoY you need some better samples mate the built in fruityloops samples can only take you so far. Try looking into software synths for yer bass and pads.

[phetsta]

lol decibel pimp.

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[sanch]

Originally posted by phetsta
lol decibel pimp.

u egyptian cunt!:laugh:

[sanch]

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[sanch]

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[swarbs]

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[swarbs]

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[swarbs]

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[phetsta]

LOL@apoc and sanch. u dickheads.