peep my track

[osiris]

new track, i guess it's the second track i've done, first one i've posted here.

your 'constructive criticism' is welcome.

resist - we want your soul (remix) (http://members.iinet.net.au/~fahim/resist-we_want_your_soul_(remix).mp3)

i really wouldn't know how to classify it, just listen and tell me what you think :)

[KungFusion]

heh, I like the begining were it sounds like a record starting up. :)

The production of the track has been done well (I'm only listening on crapped PC speaker at work so I can't comment too much on levels, etc.. atm). It flows nicely, but those amens?!?!

The note structure on the synthy-stab parts could be tweaked a little, not that it sounds bad how they are just doesn't sound 100% right.

All up quite a nice track, I'll have to load it up at home to get the full effect of bass and stuff! Then I'll let you know what I really think! ;)

[osiris]

Originally posted by KungFusion
heh, I like the begining were it sounds like a record starting up. :)

The production of the track has been done well (I'm only listening on crapped PC speaker at work so I can't comment too much on levels, etc.. atm). It flows nicely, but those amens?!?!

The note structure on the synthy-stab parts could be tweaked a little, not that it sounds bad how they are just doesn't sound 100% right.

All up quite a nice track, I'll have to load it up at home to get the full effect of bass and stuff! Then I'll let you know what I really think! ;)

cheers, yeh i wanna hear what you think with the bass cranked on your speakers at home, im pretty sure i got everything eq'd right i'm just not sure if the bass is loud enough.

the note structure on the stabs - yeh, i 'randomised' a few of the bars for experimentation, and it ended up sounded a little bit odd but it grew on me so i left it...:)

[progressive_poster]

Downloading now...

Will listen a bit later :D

[progressive_poster]

Hey osiris!

The file I've got is only about a minute long (something wrong here?)...

The bit I've listened to so far is shmick! Good, clean production, but I would need to hear the rest of it to give a comprehensive opinion!

[osiris]

Originally posted by progressive_poster
Hey osiris!

The file I've got is only about a minute long (something wrong here?)...

The bit I've listened to so far is shmick! Good, clean production, but I would need to hear the rest of it to give a comprehensive opinion!

hey thanks for downloading
i just checked, the file is all there, maybe your download stuffed up or something... i would try again?