Need Some Advice

[Fezz]

I've been working on this tune lately, and I need some advice on it.

Basically i've put a sub-bassline in it and i'm not sure if i should keep it or not. I think it makes the mix a bit muddy, and it's probably really out of key aswell, but without it, the tunes pretty boring.

It's still not great, but i was just wandering if i should keep the new bassline in it.

Newer version with added bassline (http://www.arach.net.au/~duggan/Acid%20Out%20v2.mp3)

Heres the older version without it (http://artists.iuma.com/site-bin/mp3gen/77950/IUMA/Bands/VBass/audio/VBass_-_Acid_Out.mp3)

Thanks for any advice

[nigel]

sounds fine to me, but sampling the cutslo reece hurts the baby jesus

[Fezz]

Yeah someone else said it sounded the cutslo reece, but before the townspeople hang me, I'd like to state that it isn't sampled from it.

Thanks for checkin it out

[voi]

Before u get offended this is only my point of view so take it as a lil advice, considering i dont really listen to the hard stuff i find this track just another contibution to the reece family... theres alot of un- authentic creations out there, maybe find some style about yah, i cant really feel it.
maybe u need vocals to make it bouncing, i dunno... im in a bad mood, ill get back to ya later bout this.

i feel like one of those dudes on aust idol.

if i had to choose the new would be acceptable.

[Fezz]

Hey man,

no harm done, just constructive critism and your right anyway.

I only worked on this one coz some guys asked me to put it together. It wasn't anyhting new or special, so i pretty much just did it to practive structuring my tunes.

I was thinking of chucking in sections of the vocal sample that start the song and looping them... well, i can't really explain it too well.

anyway, thanks for takin the time, i'll try to get round and check any of your stuff that's around